This post is part of a series of posts sponsored by SCBWI Florida Tampa Bay area writers. We invite you to join us in this online book study of THE WRITER’S JOURNEY: MYTHIC
STRUCTURE FOR WRITERS, Third Edition by Christopher Vogler.
Post
#2
Book
1, pages 1-36
Contributor:
Shannon Hitchcock
Christopher Vogler says, “The hero’s
story is always a journey.” He defines a hero as the character who usually:
1.
Learns
or grows the most.
2.
Has
the most action.
3.
Is
connected with self-sacrifice.
Sacrifice is the true mark of a hero. As
readers we identify with him and see the world through his eyes.
There are several types of heroes:
1.
Willing
& Unwilling.
2.
Anti-heroes,
(e.g. Robin Hood, villain in the eyes of society, but the reader sympathizes
with him).
3.
Group
Oriented Heroes.
4.
Loner
heroes – think Clint Eastwood.
5.
Catalyst
Heroes, (e.g. Eddie Murphy’s character Axel Foley in Beverly Hills Cop. Axel
doesn’t change very much during the movie, but the other characters change
because of him)
Once we meet and identify with the hero,
we’re ready to go on a journey with him. It can be an outward journey to an
actual place, or an inward journey of the mind, the heart, and the spirit.
Christopher Vogler uses a twelve-stage
heroes journey. It goes like this:
1.
Most
stories start in the ordinary world; Dorothy’s story started in Kansas.
2.
In
the ordinary world, our hero receives a call to adventure.
3.
The
hero is often reluctant and refuses the call,
4.
But
is encouraged by a mentor to accept the challenge.
5.
The
hero enters the special world where he encounters tests, allies, and enemies.
6.
In
the special world, the hero approaches the inmost cave, (the most dangerous
place, like Indiana Jones entering The Temple of Doom).
7.
He
endures the ordeal,
8.
Takes
possession of the reward,
9.
And
is pursued back to the ordinary world, (often there’s a great chase scene).
10.Death and
darkness make one last attempt to defeat our hero.
11.He overcomes the
final challenge and is transformed.
12.In the end, the
hero returns from his quest to benefit the ordinary world.
As I was reading and studying these
stages, I tried to make my novel, THE BALLAD OF JESSIE PEARL fit neatly into
the twelve steps. JESSIE is not a precise fit. That made me skeptical until I
came across this passage, “The stages can be deleted, added to, and drastically
shuffled without losing any of their power.” In other words, the structure is a
tool, a way to think through plot, but it doesn’t necessarily have to be followed
to the letter. When I consider the stages in those terms, I can see how they
might help me.
How about the story you’re currently
crafting? Does it fit neatly into the twelve stages of the hero’s journey? If
not, what stages have you added, left out, or shuffled? Leave a comment and
let’s discuss.
Meet Today’s
Contributor—Shannon Hitchcock
Shannon
Hitchcock is a Tampa based freelance writer. Her debut novel, THE BALLAD OF
JESSIE PEARL was published by namelos in 2013, and her latest novel, CAROLINA
GIRLS is under contract with Scholastic. You can learn more about Shannon at
http://www.shannonhitchcock.com.
7 comments:
Nice, succinct post, Shannon! I enjoyed reading it.
Great review, Shannon. One of the things I find hard to do after reading a book on structure like this is keep it out of my head as I'm writing a first draft. For me, this information is most useful as a revision tool. It's interesting that Jessie Pearl rearranged some of the journey stages. And speaking of Jessie Pearl,I'll kick off this blog post's celebration of your Crystal Kite award!
Great post, Shannon. Very helpful to hear how all this played out in your book. I agree with Susan, lots of structure components can be addressed in revision. I'm also interested to see how Vogler's ideas can help me on the front end when planning. Kudos!
I am a big planner. I like to think through plot before I start writing. That doesn't mean that things don't change during the process, but the better my upfront planning, the less rewriting I have to do. But that said, there are probably as many different ways to write a book as there are writers. Thanks for the congratulations! Am thrilled to win a Crystal Kite!
I love the movie references--so helpful. Vogler's background in screenwriting gives him that wealth of knowledge. I am trying now to find those same cahracters in literature...would love to have a cheat sheet for easy reference.Thanks for the post, Nancy!
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