Sunday, October 23, 2011

Coming This Week!

Week of October 23—What We Can Learn from Horn Book Reviews

Quotes of the week:

Learning is what most adults will do for a living in the 21st century.
—Unknown

The illiterate of the future are not those you cannot read or write. They are those who cannot learn, unlearn, and relearn.
—Alvin Toffler

The Horn Book Magazine is considered by many as the “bible” of children’s literature. Published bi-monthly since 1924, each issue features articles, reviews, and features about current happenings in children’s literature, while also providing a historical perspective. The Horn Book Guide to Children’s Young Adult Books is released semi-annually and features reviews of hard-cover releases from the previous six months. This week on Picture This! we’ll examine some of the latest reviews from the The Horn Book Guide to Children’s Young Adult Books and see what we can discover that can impact our writing.

Monday—The Best Picture Book Releases of the Last Six Months
Tuesday—What Causes Some Picture Books Falter?
Wednesday—What Does this Mean to Me and My Writing?
Thursday—A Personal Approach to Reviews
Friday—More about Horn Book

Friday, October 21, 2011

Picture Book Critiques
I’ve been staying busy with my critique service, but now have a few openings. If you have a picture book manuscript in need of an in-depth critique, please check out my services. Reasonable, realistic, and reliable!

WHAT YOU RECEIVE IN A CRITQUE
n I begin with an overall list of the things I love about your story and your writing, possible concerns, and possible fixes.
n Then I provide a line-by-line critique, which may include suggested cuts, additions, and comments.
n I will also look at the BIG PICTURE of your plot and story development.

WHY YOU CAN TRUST ME TO PROVIDE A QUALITY CRITIQUE
n I am a published picture book author and have been published in other genres as well—educational resources, inspirational books, and magazine articles to name a few.
n I critique nearly a hundred picture book manuscripts a year.
n I have taught creative writing to children for years.  I know how to teach and coach as well as critique.  And I know what kids love and what they don’t.
n I have worked as an editor, editorial group manager, and a coordinator of children’s product development for a major not-for-profit publisher.

For more information, rates, and availability, visit: http://robsanderswrites.com/Critique_Service.html!

PiBoIdMo 2011 Is Coming!

Week of October 16—Finding Hooks to Inspire Your Books
Friday, October 21—PiBoIdMo 2011 Is Coming!

Generating ideas for writing still seems to be the thing that causes picture book writers the greatest struggle. That’s why I’m happy to endorse and support this year’s PiMoIdMo!

What is PiBoIdMo? Why, it’s Picture Book Idea Month!

Tired of novelists having all the fun in November with NaNoWriMo, Tara Lazar created PiBoIdMo as a 30-day challenge for picture book writers. The concept is to create 30 picture book ideas in 30 days. You don’t have to write a manuscript. You don’t need potential best-seller ideas.


You might think of a clever title. Or a name for a character. Or just a silly thing like “purple polka-dot pony.” The object is to heighten your picture-book-idea-generating senses. Ideas may build upon other ideas and your list of potential stories will grow stronger as the days pass. By the end of the month, you’ll have a file of ideas to help inspire you throughout the year.
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Picture Book Idea Month, or PiBoIdMo 2011, will be underway in November, with official sign-up beginning the last week in October. You must sign up for PiBoIdMo in order to qualify for prizes! Watch for information on Tara’s blog Writing for Kids While Raising Them (http://taralazar.wordpress.com/). I’ll also be posting addition information on Picture This! as it becomes available.

Thursday, October 20, 2011

New Discoveries at My Local Bookstores

Week of October 16—Finding Hooks to Inspire Your Books
Thursday, October 20—New Discoveries at My Local Bookstores

When I browse my local bookstores, I’m always looking for what is displayed and what pops off the shelf and causes me to pick up a book. Like you, I pass by more books than I ever pick up. Of the ones I pick up, most I read only a fraction of the text, or thumb through the pages. So when a book gets my attention, I actually read it, and even enjoy it, I assume that’s a sign of good book (at least to me). So here are my latest discoveries at my local bookstores:

Pigs Are Big
I lost count of the number of books with pig characters I saw last Saturday. Ok, I get it—pigs are funny!

Most Hilarious Pig Title
Pig Kahuna
By Jennifer Gordon Sattler
© 2011
Bloomsbury, Inc.

I laughed aloud as soon as I saw the title and cover illustration and I read the book from start to finish. I’m happy to say no one stopped to stare as I kept laughing page after page. A surfing pig—need I say more? The story does not follow the typical three-attempts-three-failures approach, but does have rising and falling action and an epic climax. (Okay, as epic as one can be in a picture book about a surfing pig!)

Best Pig Book by a Former Olympian
Dream Big, Little Pig
By Kristi Yamaguchi
Illustrated by Tim Bowers
© 2011
Sourcebooks Jabberwocky

And now, ladies and gentlemen, an ice-skating pig! I don’t usually plug celebrity books, but this is a particularly cute one. This is the story of persevering, of supportive friends and family, of finding your niche, and of going with gusto for your dreams. I understand a follow-up book is in the works—always the sign of success.


Interactive Books Are Still Hot
A Robot with a Heart
The Robot Book
By Heather Brown
© 2010
Accord Publishing

Don’t let this board book fool you—it may look simple, but it’s complex on many levels. For instance—the wheels, levers, hinges, doors, and flaps that bring the robot to life are ingenious and fun to play with. The story—which I would estimate is less than 50 words—tells the reader how robots are constructed. The message lets us know that even something made from metal can have the most important characteristic of all . . . a heart.


Short Text is Every Where
A New Book from an Old Master
Bumble-Ardy
By Maurice Sendak
© 2011
Michael Di Capua Books/Harper Collins Publishers

Picture book icon, Maurice Sendak, is back! The winner of the 1964 Caldecott Medal for Where the Wild Things Are and the first American to win the Hans Christian Andersen Award, has written and illustrated his latest book at 80+ years! The brief text tells a heart wrenching/heartwarming story of a pig (yes, another pig) who has never celebrated his birthday—until now. I wholeheartedly recommend that you read this book (already on the NY Times best seller list) and Leonard Marcus’ interview with Sendak in the latest Hornbook.

Wednesday, October 19, 2011

Special Events in the Lives of Children

Week of October 16—Finding Hooks to Inspire Your Books
Wednesday, October 19—Special Events in the Lives of Children

When I visited Barnes & Noble on Saturday there was a display with books about new babies and becoming a big brother and big sister. This caught my eye since my great-niece has just “welcomed” a twin brother and sister into her family. Many of the “starting school” books that had been featured back in August and September have found their way onto shelves—but at least they're still in the store! When thinking of hooks, we can think beyond seasons and holidays. We can think about the lives of children, issues they face, events in which they participant on a regular basis, and more.

School Events, Activities, and Happenings
First Day of School
School Supply Shopping
Media Center Orientation
Touring School
Red Ribbon Week—Say No to Drugs (October)
Great American Teach-in (November)
Picture Day
Science Fair
Spelling Bee
Christmas Party (Holiday Party)
Winter Break
Book Fair
Field Trips
Tests, Tests, Tests
Assemblies
Talent Shows
Fire Drills
Valentine Party
Spring Break
Last Day of School

Family Events
New Baby
Moving
Divorce
New House
Visiting Grandparents
Celebrating Holidays
New Pet

Childhood Development/Stages
First Tooth
First Steps
First Haircut
Becoming a Big Sister/Brother
Visiting Doctor
Visiting Dentist
Going to Preschool
Going to Kindergarten
Going to School
Sleepovers and Homesickness
Summer Camp

Tuesday, October 18, 2011

Holidays and Observances Celebrating Diversity

Week of October 16—Finding Hooks to Inspire Your Books
Tuesday, October 18—Holidays and Observances Celebrating Diversity  

As a writer you may know about (or discover) and event that needs to celebrated and written about that no one else has tapped into. Who’s to say that a publisher or bookseller wouldn’t decide that the topic you have introduced isn’t worthy of being featured in a store? Be creative, venture into new territory . . . but remember that you can pitch the event, holiday, or observances along with your book. You might very well create a new hook of which no one else could have dreamed!

Holidays and Observances Celebrating Diversity
JANUARY
Religious Freedom Day

FEBRUARY
Black History Month
Chinese Lunar New Year
Rosa Parks’ Birthday
Mexico Constitution Day
Race Relations Day

MARCH
Greek-American Heritage Month
Irish-American Heritage Month
Women’s History Month
World Day of Prayer
Brazil Carnival

APRIL
National Tartan Day

MAY
Asian Pacific American History Month
Jewish-American Heritage Month
National Day of Prayer (USA)
Holocaust Memorial Day
Cinco de Mayo
May Day

JUNE
Fil-American Friendship Day
Juneteenth
Gay and Lesbian Pride Month

SEPTEMBER
Hispanic Heritage Month

OCTOBER
German-American Heritage Month
National Italian-American Heritage Month
Polish-American Heritage Month

NOVEMBER
National American Indian Heritage Month

Seasonal Changes
Spring, March
Summer, June (Summer Solstice—longest daylight)
Fall, September
Winter, December (Winter Solstice—shortest daylight)

Monday, October 17, 2011

Holidays and Special Occasions

Week of October 16—Finding Hooks to Inspire Your Books
Monday, October 17—Holidays and Special Occasions

When I visited Barnes & Nobles yesterday there were three (yes, THREE) separate Halloween picture book displays in the children’s book area. Holidays are a simple way to organize a display in a store or library, to create a flyer about new releases, or to organize critiques in a newspaper. You might have written a story that fits into one of the holiday “hooks” listed below, or perhaps one of these holidays will inspire a new story.

Let me quickly add that just because you have a holiday hook does not mean you have a winning book. (Oh, that it could be that easy.) And not every holiday is equal in the eyes of those who market and promote books. I have what I think is a wonderful Thanksgiving book, but my agent is reluctant to send it out to publishers. It seems that Thanksgiving is a short season for books to be on the shelf since it’s sandwiched between the Halloween push and the Christmas holiday rush. Because of that, few Thanksgiving books are published each year and, as rule, they don’t sell in large quantities because they are displayed for such a short period of time. With that in mind, choose your hooks carefully!

Holidays and Special Occasions
JANUARY
New Year’s Day
Inauguration Day
Marin Luther King Day

FEBRUARY
Groundhog Day
Valentine’s Day
Lincoln’s Birthday
Washington’s Birthday
President’s Day

MARCH
St. Patrick’s Day

MARCH/APRIL
Mardi Gras
Good Friday
Easter

APRIL
April Fool’s Day
Arbor Day

MAY
National Teacher’s Day/Week
Mother’s Day
Memorial Day (formerly Decoration Day)

JUNE
Flag Day
Father’s Day

JULY
Independence Day (4th of July)

SEPTEMBER
Labor Day
Patriots Day
Citizenship Day
Grandparents Day
Rosh Hashanah
Yom Kippur

OCTOBER
Columbus Day (Discoveries Day or Pioneers Day)
Halloween

NOVEMBER
Election Day
Veterans Day
Thanksgiving Day

DECEMBER
Pearl Harbor Remembrance Day
Christmas Day
Hanukkah
Kwanza

(Please note: There are many other high and holy days of which I am less familiar. Please consider those as other “hook” options.)

Events that Occur Less Frequently
Leap Year
The Olympics
Presidential Election

Sunday, October 16, 2011

Coming This Week!

Week of October 16—Finding Hooks to Inspire Your Books
Quotes of the Week:
The secret to a rich life is to have more beginnings than endings.
—Dave Weinbaum

There are things known and there are things unknown, and in between are the doors.
—Jim Morrison

I love the core message of the quotes above—new beginnings and open doors. So that’s what we’ll spend some time exploring this week. . . getting inspiration for new writing ideas, opening ourselves up to the possibilities around us, and finding open doors for our work.

Recently I quoted an editor from a major publishing house who told me: “We don’t publish any book that doesn’t have a marketing hook that gives a reason for it to be displayed on shelves.”

This week, I’m brainstorming what some of those promotional hooks might be. Once we have the possibilities firmly in our minds, we can begin dreaming and becoming inspired. We’ll end the week with some of my latest discoveries at my local bookstores and some exciting news about how you can gather tons of ideas to inspire your picture book writing. Are you ready to open doors and enjoy some new beginnings?

Monday—Holidays and Special Occasions
Tuesday—Holidays and Observances Celebrating Diversity  
Wednesday—Special Events in the Lives of Children
Thursday—New Discoveries at My Local Bookstores
Friday—PiBoIdMo 2011Is Coming!
Another Magical Day!

We had a wonderful last session at the School of Magical Writing Scribes (aka Mintz Elementary, in Brandon, Florida). Thirty 4th graders learned some magical writing crafts and elaboration strategies to make their writing spellbinding!


Professor Moltisanti and I mixed some potions and students wrote about the event using sentence variety.


A host of teachers from Mintz participated and assisted with instruction. In this photo, Professor Szewc and I wield our feather pens.


What magical writing experience would be complete without sweets? We enjoyed a bubbling green brew and munched on Owl Hooters.

Friday, October 14, 2011

Light Up the Night--Building a Library

Week of October 9—An Interview with Picture Book Author Jean Reidy
Friday, October 14—Light Up the Night—Building a Library

This is the final installment in a five-part interview with picture book author, Jean Reidy.

Rob Sanders: Jean, I heard that you were using the launch of your newest book, Light Up the Night to benefit a special cause. Tell us about it.

Jean Reidy: Most people know by now that my picture book, Light Up the Night, will be released October 11, 2011. What people probably don't know is that the story—while visibly very American—was inspired by the children of Uganda, many of whom are orphaned by AIDS while others have been displaced due to civil war. My family has developed strong connections to that country and its children over the past six years.


To celebrate the release of the book and those beautiful children, I’m holding an online auction November 7th-18th to benefit literacy in Africa and a library at Musana Children's Home in Iganga, Uganda, where I worked last summer. The auction will be called LIGHT UP THE LIBRARY.

I’m coordinating project with the volunteers for an amazing Peace Corps project called Libraries for Life—which is providing books for libraries in designated Ugandan schools. The project is being administered by, not only the Peace Corps, but also the Books for Africa organization. And Musana has been designated as one of the recipient libraries.

It’s Your Turn!
1. Visit Jean’s auction at http://lightupthelibrary.blogspot.com/!

Thursday, October 13, 2011

Writing Routines and Jean's Future

Week of October 9—An Interview with Picture Book Author Jean Reidy
Thursday, October 13—Writing Routines and Jean’s Future

This is the fourth installment in a five-part interview with picture book author, Jean Reidy.

Rob Sanders: What is your writing routine?

Jean Reidy: I always find this such an interesting question. And I’'m especially intrigued with the routines of the world’s great writers and best-selling novelists. I consider some routines legitimate for inspiration and others . . . well, downright superstition. But who am I to judge authors who sell millions of books?
More so, I admire the writers with full-time day jobs who write at night or in the wee hours of the morning. I wish I had that grit. They are the true writing warriors who have the work ethic for great success.

So this is where I feel like a phony among fellow writers. Routine? Who has time for a routine? Oh, don't get me wrong. I dream of a routine and sometimes, for a day or two, I feign one. I perk my coffee at just the right hour. I check my e-mail while the coffee’s  perking. I bang out 1000 words and then I go for a run, during which I meditate on plot points and characterization. But sooner or later, usually within a few hours, life gets in the way.

Life—as in a lacrosse banquet, or a high school graduation, or my son’s wedding, or my mother's move, or my baby going to college, or 200 kids in Uganda. And then my writer's routine, in an instant, falls apart. I can’t be terribly “routine” when I have multiple passions competing for time and space.


But interestingly, it’'s often when I’m not perking or pecking or penning that I find the fodder for my stories. Confession: LIGHT UP THE NIGHT was composed mostly in the shower. Yes, I do have to force my butt into the chair and actually crank out the text from time to time. But when I write when I least expect it—rather than according to some predetermined schedule—I have few expectations. And that’s when fun things happen.

As of this past August, I’ve found myself in a new situation—empty nesthood. So all that blather you just read about life getting in the way and writing when I least expect it may be rendered a thing of the past. Watch, you’ll probably find me every morning at 6:47 a.m. on the dot, wearing my 1978 Cotton Bowl T-Shirt (ask me who won!), revising my manuscript with my lucky totem pole pencil (too bad I can’t sharpen it!) on perforated recycled computer paper. I just hope I can keep the magic!
RS: What’s next? What are you working on now? What are the goals you still want to reach and what can we expect to see from you in the future?
JR: These days I have a lot happening. All you have to do is take a look at my cluttered kitchen table. As you know, I have my online auction LIGHT UP THE LIBRARY coming up November 17-18 to celebrate my latest book release. (NOTE: See tomorrow’s post for more information.) The auction benefits a new library at the Musana Children's Home in Iganga, Uganda, where I worked last summer. By the way, I've received some awesome items for writers at every point in their careers, including a picture book manuscript critique from a celebrity author/blogger—eh- hem—not to mention any names!

Then in January, my next book TOO PRINCESSY! comes out from Bloomsbury. It's the third in the TOO PURPLEY! TOO PICKLEY! series with the same wonderful illustrator, Genevieve Leloup. I've yet to figure out how I’m going to celebrate that release, but I’m sure it will involve a tiara.

Later in 2012, comes TIME (OUT) FOR MONSTERS from Disney Hyperion. The oh-so-talented Robert Neubecker illustrated this book about a kid stuck with only his imagination in the time-out corner. And I’m convinced Robert must have “done a little time” as a kid, because his artwork is spot-on hilarious.

Finally, probably in 2013, ALL THROUGH MY TOWN comes out from Bloomsbury. I just received preliminary sketches from illustrator Leo Timmers and, oh man, are they adorable! Think busy, busy, busy.

In the midst of all that I'm working on several new picture books. When I get stuck on one I open up another. But going back to that, um . . . routine . . . question, I do need to set aside a big block of time to finish some serious revisions on a middle grade novel I wrote during the last NaNoWriMo. I'm anxious to let my agent have a read, but it's not ready for her eyes yet. I was completely convinced I'd be entering NaNoWriMo again this year. I have an idea that I really wanted to flesh out and NaNoWriMo is seriously great for butt in chair. But with my auction and other LIGHT UP THE NIGHT events, that little nugget of an idea may have to wait until next year.

It’s Your Turn!
1. What writing routine works for you? Just because Jean can be successful without routine doesn’t necessarily mean you or I can. So find the process that work best for you!

Wednesday, October 12, 2011

Getting Over Ourselves and On With Writing

Week of October 9—An Interview with Picture Book Author Jean Reidy
Wednesday, October 12—Getting Over Ourselves and Getting On With Writing


This is the third installment in a five-part interview with picture book author, Jean Reidy.

Rob Sanders: What do we need to keep in mind when writing for children?

Jean Reidy: If you notice, none of these key components mention yesterday have anything to do with “the author.” This serves as an important reminder that when we write for children, we need to get over ourselves. In my experience, I've identified five ways in which we, as picture book authors, can do that.

1. We need to get over our perspective. Whether we’re parents, teachers, librarians, childcare providers, or even simply grown-up kids, we have marvelous experiences from which to draw stories. But that perspective can also get in the way. We might want to teach or discipline or judge or convey a message. If that's the case, we might be writing for the wrong reasons. We need to put on a new pair of glasses—and if they're attached to a funny nose and mustache, even better—and view the world through a different lens. A kid’s lens.

2. We need to get over our stories. So while we mine our daily lives and history for story ideas, we might be tempted to tell a story exactly as it happened. Or tell our kid’s story because it was so cute. Or write a picture book that reminds us of a childhood story we loved. But the story we’re fixated on can suddenly get in the way of the story we should be writing. We need to remember who we’re writing for—kids today. And with that kid audience in mind, and our treasure chest of inspiration, we can turn our real stories upside-down and inside-out to reveal fresh stories that kids will love.

3. We need to get over our comfort. In other words—take risks. We can learn from the master of risk-taking himself, Mo Willems. After all, it was Mo who picked a pigeon for his main character.

4. We need to get over our words. My books TOO PURPLEY!, TOO PICKLEY! and TOO PRINCESSY! all weigh in at a whopping 48 words each. TIME (OUT) FOR MONSTERS, coming out next year, has approximately 150 words and ALL AROUND MY TOWN (coming 2013) has about 100 words. While LIGHT UP THE NIGHT is my longest picture book thus far, at approximately 650 words, it's the repetition in the cumulative verse that's driving up the word count. We spend hours poring over our carefully chosen text, but we need to remember that there’s so much at play in the picture book experience—text, art, page design, the read-aloud experience, relatability—if we think it’s all about our words, we need to think again.

5. We need to get over our egos and excuses. This is a humbling business and it’s best to approach it on our knees rather than from a pedestal. Bonus—you'll see your audience better that way!

It’s Your Turn!
1. Is there anything you need to get over in order to be the rest writer you can be?

Tuesday, October 11, 2011

Picture Book Ingredients

Week of October 9—An Interview with Picture Book Author Jean Reidy
Tuesday, October 11—Picture Book Ingredients


This is the second installment in a five-part interview with picture book author, Jean Reidy.

Rob Sanders: What are the essential ingredients for a successful picture book?

Jean Reidy: Okay, I’d be delusional if I thought that I held the key to this question. But I think others—wiser than me—have answered it. I’m a true believer in the magic of the picture book moment. I cling to the words of editor, Allyn Johnston:

"The true goal of all this work we do together: a child, a story, and deep long-lasting connection between them.”

Or Mem Fox:

“The fire of literacy is created by the emotional sparks between a child, a book, and the person reading. It isn’t achieved by the book alone, nor by the child alone, nor by the adult who’s reading aloud—it’s the relationship winding between all three, bringing them together in easy harmony.”

Those words give me goosebumps. And I’m happy to say I’ve witnessed many of those magical moments between children and books.

I think if you place that vision, which these ladies have defined so brilliantly, at the forefront of your writing, and make those moments your goal, the other goals—like picture book success—might just follow.

RS: How do you create that magical moment in a picture book?

JR: Again, I’d be lying if I told you I had the answer. But I know someone who I think nailed it perfectly—Tam Smith.

Tam, one of my best writer buddies and agency mates, wrote her Vermont College MFA thesis—we’re talking neuroscience research here—on the magical connection between the book, the child and the reader, which she calls "The Vibrant Triangle.” She says there are 4 key components of a Vibrant Triangle Picture Book and they are:

·        Spare and Purposeful Language helping to create Plot
·        Limited Words on the Page helping to create an Emotional Experience
·        Using Narrative Structure to Extend the Story Beyond itself (a life off of the page)
·        Narrative as Intuitive Stepping Stone for Learning about the World

Tam’s research shows that standout picture books weave two or more of these elements together. http://www.tamaraellissmith.com. I think if we hold our manuscripts up against this framework and critically assess the fit, we’re doing our job.



It’s Your Turn!
1. If you haven't yet explored Jean’s first two picture books, I encourage you to do so ASAP!