tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-378441400441702936.post7614370449332971649..comments2024-02-16T03:28:53.170-05:00Comments on Picture This!: Trying Too HardRob Sandershttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05189999418618335098noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-378441400441702936.post-14782235071172895222012-07-31T17:15:31.741-04:002012-07-31T17:15:31.741-04:00Love the sprinkle concept, Rob - but I must disagr...Love the sprinkle concept, Rob - but I must disagree with you on rhyme. Very, very few folks are naturally talented at rhyme BUT that does;t mean one can't work hard and become talented! I attended a wonderful workshop at NJSCBWi on rhyme with Corey Rosen Schwartz and Tiffany Strelitz Haber. Amazing! Those interested in rhyme might want to check out their new blog, The Meter Maids (http://www.themetermaids.blogspot.com). Happy rhyming!Leslie Z.https://www.blogger.com/profile/14761778835521877670noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-378441400441702936.post-53640877325414000922012-07-30T08:04:21.686-04:002012-07-30T08:04:21.686-04:00Terrific post, Rob, and Cathy, thanks for the Word...Terrific post, Rob, and Cathy, thanks for the Wordle tip. I just used it, and wow!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01114162398848233118noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-378441400441702936.post-74116390167644910122012-07-28T20:48:44.932-04:002012-07-28T20:48:44.932-04:00Tina and Jean, thanks for the great comments. Cath...Tina and Jean, thanks for the great comments. Cathy the wordle idea is terrific. Do you just paste in your entire manuscript>Rob Sandershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05189999418618335098noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-378441400441702936.post-87141050154029276522012-07-28T03:49:00.937-04:002012-07-28T03:49:00.937-04:00Yummy post! Actually, a great analogy to remember ...Yummy post! Actually, a great analogy to remember to sprinkle our ms! Thanks, Rob!Tina Chohttp://tinamcho.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-378441400441702936.post-59773043298449613362012-07-27T17:22:13.740-04:002012-07-27T17:22:13.740-04:00I love using www.wordle.net as a quick visual chec...I love using www.wordle.net as a quick visual check tool to reveal if I am using a word or a 'sprinkle' too often!Cathy Mealeyhttp://bildebok.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-378441400441702936.post-36768551068962177712012-07-27T15:57:59.592-04:002012-07-27T15:57:59.592-04:00Great post! I can tell almost immediately, from cr...Great post! I can tell almost immediately, from critique group comments, when I'm trying too hard in my manuscript. It's often when I haven't let the muse direct me and I've forced form onto content rather than vice verse.Jean Reidyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12103543981151799121noreply@blogger.com